On 11/09/2013 12:23, btc@openinworld.com wrote:
Some minor nit-picks...
"please do so as we are going to iterate over what was done there." I don't understand what you mean by 'iterate over'? Do you me 'build on'?
Yes, that's what I meant: "improve". If you find it hard to understand, let me know.
"let's first settle for a target design. For the rest of this episode, we will try to achieve the following design. " I get to the bottom and the last snapshot it doesn't look the same as the one at the top. At the top you should mention that your target design is achieved over several posts (if that is the case).
No wonder it doesn't match :-) Figure 1 is not a snapshot from the system. It is the UI design done in LibreOffice draw. I'll mention that.
"Note lines 9, 10, 17 and 18." "Note new lines 9, 10, 17 and 18."
* At the top you should specify what version of Pharo the tutorial relates to. Information on the web hangs around for a very long time and someone could get trapped later trying your tutorial on a later version of Pharo.
Correct. That's why at the beginning of this episode the reader is asked to first proceed to episode 1 if he hasn't done so already and in episode one in Prerequisites section (http://www.bahmanm.com/blogs/spec-part-1-basics#section-1) it is mentioned that for this series Pharo 2.0 will be used.
* Regarding #defaultSpec, I happen to like what is used in PharoLauncher specLayout <spec: #default> ^ SpecLayout composed ...etc
I don't understand your point. Could you elaborate a bit more on this?
Overall it a nice next step introducing just a bit more functionality. It reads very well. I look forward to the next one.
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