Thanks Sean! This is really a great review! I owe you one! Alexandre
On Apr 21, 2018, at 9:16 PM, Sean P. DeNigris <sean@clipperadams.com> wrote:
abergel wrote
Feedback is very welcome.
Copy edit pass on Chapters 1 & 2: https://github.com/AgileArtificialIntelligence/AgileArtificialIntelligence.g...
A few more observations on Chapter 2 requiring deeper investigation: - When you introduce the #assert:equals:, it would be great to show a GT debugger with the diff pane at the bottom, which gives a hint at what makes Pharo special - Capitalized temps in `#digitalComparator:`?! Sacrilege ;-) - "Grapher" is introduced as if the reader already knows what that is. Is that assumed to be the case?
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