I did a native English review pass on the first half and submitted a PR on GH. A few other items: - When clipping is used to initially draw the card outline as a rounded rect, instead of using the rect as a path, it's not immediately obvious why this is done. It's only way later when the cross is drawn on the back of the card that one /may/ realize that it's so card contents (e.g. the cross) don't get drawn outside the rounded bounds. It would be good to explain this upfront. - The booklet reached from the GH readme seems out of sync with Bloc. I had to alter a lot of the animations from the loaded code e.g. BlTransformAnimation did not exist (I used BlScaleAnimation instead), animations didn't understand #absolute, ` animation startOn: target` needed to be changed to `animation target: target; start`, etc. Otherwise a very nice tutorial. Thanks! ----- Cheers, Sean -- Sent from: http://forum.world.st/Pharo-Smalltalk-Developers-f1294837.html