On Oct 16, 2013, at 4:32 AM, btc@openinworld.com wrote:
Stef,
A few weeks back I had occasion to review the Pharo Vision document again. In the process of adding an additional Use-Case, I ended up marking lots of small editorial improvements throughout the document. My focus was not on eliminating grammar mistakes by non-native-english authors (it was pretty good) - but more on trying to find the 'best' way to phrase something. Eliminating the sort of things that creep into my own writing until the third or fourth review, along the lines of that saying about the writing process... "The job is not done until there is nothing left to remove"
cheers -ben <pharovision-btc-markup-2013-09-11.pdf>
very nice! Thanks! I will make a pass to integrate your suggestions. Marcus