looks great I see you added the link for slack invitation that I could not find, awesome On Sun, Jan 17, 2016 at 7:35 PM stepharo <stepharo@free.fr> wrote:

Here is the reviewed Preface of UpdatePharoByExample.

https://github.com/SquareBracketAssociates/UpdatedPharoByExample for typos...

stef

Hi, I just read through the Preface and it reads very well. However, I found three small issues. On page 1 at the bottom there is "Seasideweb development" which I guess should read "Seaside web development". On page 2 there is "MacOSX" as supported platform which Apple renamed to "OS X" some time ago (OS X instead of MacOSX: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/OS_X). Also on page 2 I read the sentence "You can make an impact on Pharo" but to me it was not really obvious how this sentence relates to the paragraph it belongs to or how you actually can make an impact on Pharo. Hope this helps, Manfred On Sun, Jan 17, 2016 at 6:33 PM, stepharo <stepharo@free.fr> wrote:

Here is the reviewed Preface of UpdatePharoByExample.

https://github.com/SquareBracketAssociates/UpdatedPharoByExample for typos...

stef