Some feedback on design I hope is useful.
* Citizen - ��I like the perpendicular layout of "cite" and "zen".�� I never got it before that it was for citations.�� Nice branding.�� Maybe you could put a mortar board hat on top of the big "C"
* Flow - I find the text under the storm-trooper a bit negative and confusing.�� I don't think you mean to imply that you can't actually do that in Smalltalk, which is the impression I got.�� Maybe something like... "Smalltalk _was_ the HTML5 single-page platform I was looking for!" or just...��
Now the split of "consultants" over two lines grated, so I presumed to wordsmith your text...
�� �� Flow's mission provides consultants,
�� �� startups and software houses
�� �� with a competitive��full-stack��Smalltalk
�� �� framework for quick demo delivery with
�� �� all the modern html5 features the
�� �� market expects today (2014).��
�� �� Use tactically for gaining momentum
�� �� with prospects and clients, then��
�� �� scale to full��projects��successfully
�� �� delivered by kickass
�� �� productive teams or individuals.
Try to get the bottom of the github link text to align with the bottom of the stormtrooper image, so the whitespace beneath is a full width rectangle.
You don't necessarily need to say what is the "front end" and what is the "back end".�� Deleting that text provides the opportunity to stack the three logos vertically, centred over the bottom left Qcode. Drop the "there" in "favourite there" so it doesn't overhang the Qcode. ��
Move the dots of the eyes to be looking at the word "flow"��through the whitespace left by moving the logos.
(Sorry to go to town Sebastian, but I saw more potential.)
HTH
cheers -ben
P.S. Sorry I don't have any of my own.�� I really should resurrect my masters project onto latest Pharo/Roassal.
