Very cool. As well as some creative rephrasing, in general I think you should include the text that appears on the product. I REALLY like the "Objects at your finger tips" phrase. Consider adding that to the web site logo and other, if it can fit appropriately. Note that the originals were not so wrong, as I spent some with a thesaurus [1] to get it right.I would like to thank lusy and jeff for their effort. Dear All, let me introduce a new store "PharoShop" http://www.zazzle.com.au/pharoshop Please note the products description - I'm not confident in my english and ready to accept your offers for inspire the customers :) Have a great day! Lusy