Thanks a lot, Ben, for your remarks; I applied them all.
I am glad you liked the article.
Sven
> On 10 Mar 2016, at 01:21, Ben Coman <btc@openinworld.com> wrote:
>
> On Thu, Mar 10, 2016 at 6:05 AM, Sven Van Caekenberghe <sven@stfx.eu> wrote:
>>
>> I wrote another article:
>>
>>�� Tiny, yet so beautiful
>>�� The smallest piece of great Pharo code
>>�� https://medium.com/concerning-pharo/tiny-yet-so-beautiful-1ef5149c910e
>>
>
> I love reading these articles of yours.�� Very well written.
> Feedback for some minor wordsmithing...
>
> -�� 2 out of 5 reserved words in the language.)
> + 2 out of _the_ 5 reserved words in the language.) _They are
> instances respectively of classes True and False, that have common
> superclass Boolean._
>
> -�� where an identical message _results in_ different implementations
> + where an identical message _invokes_ different implementations
>
> -�� Manipulating objects using their API
> + Manipulating objects using their _pre-existing_ API
>
> -�� Switserland
> + Switzerland
>
> cheers -ben
>