> On 23 Jan 2015, at 16:41, Ben Coman <btc@openInWorld.com> wrote:
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> Some feedback on design I hope is useful.

Hi Ben, your feedback is useful, but I want to stress that this is not a design contest: it is developers marketing to developers. The goal is to advertise what we have.

BTW, in terms of marketing, we already lost to these guys:

��http://gt.moosetechnology.org

the two movies are hard to beat, right ?

Luckily they are on our side ;-)

Sven

> * Citizen -�� I like the perpendicular layout of "cite" and "zen".�� I never got it before that it was for citations.�� Nice branding.�� Maybe you could put a mortar board hat on top of the big "C"
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> * Bloc - while considering copyright, maybe use a Tetris looking image for the background (http://tinyurl.com/ktpdvwg) or (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tetris#mediaviewer/File:NES_Tetris_Box_Front.jpg)
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> * Flow - I find the text under the storm-trooper a bit negative and confusing.�� I don't think you mean to imply that you can't actually do that in Smalltalk, which is the impression I got.�� Maybe something like... "Smalltalk _was_ the HTML5 single-page platform I was looking for!" or just...
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> Now the split of "consultants" over two lines grated, so I presumed to wordsmith your text...
>�� �� ��Flow's mission provides consultants,
>�� �� ��startups and software houses
>�� �� ��with a competitive full-stack Smalltalk
>�� �� ��framework for quick demo delivery with
>�� �� ��all the modern html5 features the
>�� �� ��market expects today (2014).
>�� �� ��Use tactically for gaining momentum
>�� �� ��with prospects and clients, then
>�� �� ��scale to full projects successfully
>�� �� ��delivered by kickass
>�� �� ��productive teams or individuals.
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> Try to get the bottom of the github link text to align with the bottom of the stormtrooper image, so the whitespace beneath is a full width rectangle.
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> You don't necessarily need to say what is the "front end" and what is the "back end".�� Deleting that text provides the opportunity to stack the three logos vertically, centred over the bottom left Qcode. Drop the "there" in "favourite there" so it doesn't overhang the Qcode.
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> Move the dots of the eyes to be looking at the word "flow" through the whitespace left by moving the logos.
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> (Sorry to go to town Sebastian, but I saw more potential.)
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> HTH
> cheers -ben
>
> P.S. Sorry I don't have any of my own.�� I really should resurrect my masters project onto latest Pharo/Roassal.
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> On Fri, Jan 23, 2015 at 10:22 PM, Sven Van Caekenberghe <sven@stfx.eu> wrote:
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> > On 23 Jan 2015, at 15:15, Esteban A. Maringolo <emaringolo@gmail.com> wrote:
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> > Sorry, what are those?
> >
> > I don't understand. :-/
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> These are 'posters' for the Pharo Project Expo for next week, afterwards they will become available online too.
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> You can make some if you like...
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> > Esteban A. Maringolo
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> >
> > 2015-01-22 17:36 GMT-03:00 stepharo <stepharo@free.fr>:
> >> One on Voyage :)
> >
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