> On 23 Jan 2015, at 18:33, Offray Vladimir Luna C��rdenas <offray@riseup.net> wrote:
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> Yep, some data visualization and moldable tools on weddings and birthdays would make a memorable party ;-)
Haha, indeed !
> Offray
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> El 23/01/15 a las 12:15, Ben Coman escribi��:
>> Thanks Sven.�� I wasn't clear on the context, and just sometimes I just can't
>> stop the mind working.
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>> Agreed, those Moose movies were fantastic.�� I want to know if they hire out for
>> weddings and birthdays ;)
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>> On Sat, Jan 24, 2015 at 1:10 AM, Sven Van Caekenberghe <sven@stfx.eu
>> <mailto:sven@stfx.eu>> wrote:
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>>�� �� ��> On 23 Jan 2015, at 16:41, Ben Coman <btc@openInWorld.com> wrote:
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>>�� �� ��> Some feedback on design I hope is useful.
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>>�� �� ��Hi Ben, your feedback is useful, but I want to stress that this is not a
>>�� �� ��design contest: it is developers marketing to developers. The goal is to
>>�� �� ��advertise what we have.
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>>�� �� ��BTW, in terms of marketing, we already lost to these guys:
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>>�� �� ��http://gt.moosetechnology.org
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>>�� �� ��the two movies are hard to beat, right ?
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>>�� �� ��Luckily they are on our side ;-)
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>>�� �� ��Sven
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>>�� �� �� > * Citizen -�� I like the perpendicular layout of "cite" and "zen".�� I
>>�� �� ��never got it before that it was for citations.�� Nice branding.�� Maybe you
>>�� �� ��could put a mortar board hat on top of the big "C"
>>�� �� �� >
>>�� �� �� > * Bloc - while considering copyright, maybe use a Tetris looking image
>>�� �� ��for the background (http://tinyurl.com/ktpdvwg) or
>>�� �� ��(http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tetris#mediaviewer/File:NES_Tetris_Box_Front.jpg)
>>�� �� �� >
>>�� �� �� > * Flow - I find the text under the storm-trooper a bit negative and
>>�� �� ��confusing.�� I don't think you mean to imply that you can't actually do that
>>�� �� ��in Smalltalk, which is the impression I got.�� Maybe something like...
>>�� �� ��"Smalltalk _was_ the HTML5 single-page platform I was looking for!" or just...
>>�� �� �� >
>>�� �� �� > Now the split of "consultants" over two lines grated, so I presumed to
>>�� �� ��wordsmith your text...
>>�� �� �� >�� �� ��Flow's mission provides consultants,
>>�� �� �� >�� �� ��startups and software houses
>>�� �� �� >�� �� ��with a competitive full-stack Smalltalk
>>�� �� �� >�� �� ��framework for quick demo delivery with
>>�� �� �� >�� �� ��all the modern html5 features the
>>�� �� �� >�� �� ��market expects today (2014).
>>�� �� �� >�� �� ��Use tactically for gaining momentum
>>�� �� �� >�� �� ��with prospects and clients, then
>>�� �� �� >�� �� ��scale to full projects successfully
>>�� �� �� >�� �� ��delivered by kickass
>>�� �� �� >�� �� ��productive teams or individuals.
>>�� �� �� >
>>�� �� �� > Try to get the bottom of the github link text to align with the bottom of
>>�� �� ��the stormtrooper image, so the whitespace beneath is a full width rectangle.
>>�� �� �� >
>>�� �� �� > You don't necessarily need to say what is the "front end" and what is the
>>�� �� ��"back end".�� Deleting that text provides the opportunity to stack the three
>>�� �� ��logos vertically, centred over the bottom left Qcode. Drop the "there" in
>>�� �� ��"favourite there" so it doesn't overhang the Qcode.
>>�� �� �� >
>>�� �� �� > Move the dots of the eyes to be looking at the word "flow" through the
>>�� �� ��whitespace left by moving the logos.
>>�� �� �� >
>>�� �� �� > (Sorry to go to town Sebastian, but I saw more potential.)
>>�� �� �� >
>>�� �� �� > HTH
>>�� �� �� > cheers -ben
>>�� �� �� >
>>�� �� �� > P.S. Sorry I don't have any of my own.�� I really should resurrect my
>>�� �� ��masters project onto latest Pharo/Roassal.
>>�� �� �� >
>>�� �� �� >
>>�� �� �� > On Fri, Jan 23, 2015 at 10:22 PM, Sven Van Caekenberghe <sven@stfx.eu
>>�� �� ��<mailto:sven@stfx.eu>> wrote:
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>>�� �� �� > > On 23 Jan 2015, at 15:15, Esteban A. Maringolo <emaringolo@gmail.com
>>�� �� ��<mailto:emaringolo@gmail.com>> wrote:
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>>�� �� �� > > Sorry, what are those?
>>�� �� �� > >
>>�� �� �� > > I don't understand. :-/
>>�� �� �� >
>>�� �� �� > These are 'posters' for the Pharo Project Expo for next week, afterwards
>>�� �� ��they will become available online too.
>>�� �� �� >
>>�� �� �� > You can make some if you like...
>>�� �� �� >
>>�� �� �� > > Esteban A. Maringolo
>>�� �� �� > >
>>�� �� �� > >
>>�� �� �� > > 2015-01-22 17:36 GMT-03:00 stepharo <stepharo@free.fr
>>�� �� ��<mailto:stepharo@free.fr>>:
>>�� �� �� > >> One on Voyage :)
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