On Apr 19, 2012, at 4:44 PM, Sean P. DeNigris wrote:

Marcus Denker-4 wrote

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We need an announce mail / new ticker entry. Any quick improvements / typo fixes?

Awesome job!!! Wow, so many changes. I've been using FS in 1.3 and that alone would be *huge*

Sorry, too late...

A few fixes: * "release of 1.4 of Pharo" sounds weird; I'd say "release of Pharo version 1.4" * "Read the new forth coming book" -> "Reading the new forthcoming book" - should be "reading", like the other bullets - forthcoming is one word * "Read the Pharo vision document" -> "Reading the Pharo vision document" - should be "reading", like the other bullets * "Now you got the feel of the effort" -> "Now you've got the feel of the effort" * "in particular for the salary of Igor Stasenko" -> "especially for the salary of Igor Stasenko" - the phrase "in particular was used twice in that line * "and for help in the infrastructure put in place" -> "and for helping to put the infrastructure in place" * "No event pulling anymore"... should be polling? * "and a lot a lot and a lot more" -> "and a lot, lot more" As exciting as this is, two "lot"s is probably enough :) * "MC handles better dependencies" -> "MC handles dependencies better" * "New version of OCompletion... duplication." Remove period like other bullets * "MultiSelection improvements" & "Drag and drop in multi selection list" -> "Multi-selection improvements" & "Drag and drop in multi-selection list" (write "multi-selection" uniformly) * "Merged NewParagraph and MultiNewParagraph" Remove extra space after "NewParagraph" * "LazyListMorph cleaning" Remove extra space * "NewTextMorph and TextComposer improvements" Remove 2 extra spaces * "Removing NewTextMorph and related" Remove extra space * "Removed BlockContext , blue book old closure encodings" Remove spec before comma * "Speedup MethodDictionary #rehash" Remove extra space * Remove "More class comments" from "Fixes" list. It's already listed under "Changes"

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