Actually, another less-is-more improvement would be to change "Pharo The immersive programming experience" to just "Pharo immersive programming" (btw with the exclusion of capital letters from the tagline)
cheers -ben

On Fri, Apr 17, 2015 at 11:58 AM, Ben Coman <btc@openinworld.com> wrote:
On reddit I see some questions regarding the "IDE and OS rolled into one" tagline on the pharo homepage.�� Of course it makes sense to me, but I can see how it might not be clear to others, who might even think "I don't need that, I already have an OS." ��I think the tagline would be strong enough without it - less is more.

cheers -ben