I like it.
Just make beam to go from the middle of the tower,
because right now it looks like beam comes from left side of it :)
I spent my days reactivating my Illustrator skills and tried my luck��on the Pharo logo. I still lack the water and some perspective mismatcheswith the stripes :) but for me this looks better than the current one :)(as usual a highly subjective opinion).
cheerscami